Although delayed by holidays in the very top of England (or the very bottom of Scotland, depending on how you look at it), here is the final instalment of the first chapter of Kingdom of the Lion. Read about a poor chap, a victim of both circumstance and hopelessness, and the compatriots he is thrown in with as the finishing touches are put to the second chapter.
Chapter two is really easy to unlock – One single comment is all it will take to get the thing posted up here as soon as possible. Let me know what you think so far – Tell me if Pryad is a good character, or the setting is interesting. Anything. Don’t try and tell me about a fantastic money-making scheme you’ve conjured up using Bitcoins and Western Union though.
Honestly, though, just having people read this means I’ve been successful in finding people to read my work. Having a little feedback would be lovely, but it is the icing on the cake.
Thanks so much.
Erratic.
Imagine Erratically 